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Black Jack-Flowers by ~Sailorkittystar:iconSailorkittystar:



"Look, Kuro'o, flowers!"
Makube grins proudly as he hold up the large bouquet. Kuro'o tilts his head to the side, impressed at the variety of different blossoms.
"Ah, thank you, Makube. You didn't have to do this, you know."

"Nah, it's OK. I had fun picking them!"
He goes over to the vase on the nightstand table, crudely replacing the dried pussy-willow plants set there as a remainder of a coming spring. The colourfull flowers provide a rather welcome contrast to the white, near-empty room. In fact, Kuro'o can't remember last time he saw flowers like that. They didn't exactly bloom near the orphanedge, much less near the playground or any of the places his wheelchair can reach.
"Where did you find these?"

"Oh, I.."
Makube's voice trails off, leaving a guilty expression on his face.

"...I kinda picked them from the flower exhibit at the museum..." He stares at the ground. Kuro'o pushes his chair closer, urging him to continue.

"W-Well, 'cause you can't see them, since you're in a wheelchair an' all..."
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Author's Comments

...I don't know if I FAIL or win this piece. Critique is very, very, VERY much encouraged.

For some reason, I really like the platonics between these two. I mean, growing up as an orphan is very, very, hard, so I picture these two must have been really close.

I've got quite a lot of short fanfiction like this on these guys, but I don't know if I'll be putting them up or not.

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:iconfauna93:
I actually really liked it, but if anything, I found it too short. But anyway, nice work here.
:iconsailorkittystar:
Ah, thanks! It's supposed to be short, since it's sort of a drabble. ^__^

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:iconsaladium:
It is very lovely!
Besides this, did you write the fanfiction?
I want to read it.
:iconsailorkittystar:
Thank you, ^W^

Ah, I'll try to get some of it up tomorrow, ^__^

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<ahref=[link] Melmo in dA's Tezuka Crew
:iconmaiyeng:
Really cute short! *^v^* I would love to read your other short fanfics~!:music:

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I'm Rokuro Makube in dA's Tezuka Crew
:iconsailorkittystar:
Ah, thank you, ^__^

I'll try and put some up when I find the time.

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<ahref=[link] Melmo in dA's Tezuka Crew
:iconnasaku:
So cute! Only if it were longer but nice job anyway... :)

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When someone tells you to get a life, tell them:

"Hey, I'm breathing and my heart's beating... I already have a life so stop tellin' me to get another... unless you want me to get yours...." :evillaugh:
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Ah, thank you! ^__^

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